Blue Pencil Critique Service

 What Pauline Bartel Can Do For You

 Let Pauline Bartel's blue pencil help you do it the right way as a freelance writer. Her editorial evaluation of your query letters, articles, short stories, and book manuscripts will increase the publishing potential of your material in the competitive freelance marketplace. She provides:

  • Objective, line-by-line review of your material
  • Analysis of the strengths and weaknesses of your writing
  • Suggestions for revision where needed
  • Advice on where and how to sell your manuscript

 She also offers consultation services either in person, via telephone, or over e-mail on various aspects of:

  • Writing
  • Publishing
  • Marketing
  • Promotion

Praise For Pauline Bartel From:

Eva Pearce of Troy, NY:

“Pauline’s suggestions on the essay I wrote were superb. I found great wisdom in her critique, and I recognized the strength her suggestions added. But, what made her critique so unique and extremely valuable was her seeking my feedback on her suggestions. She graciously responded to questions I had regarding her input.

Pauline honored my work, and my feelings about my work, by recognizing it as my creation, and ultimately that I am the only one with the right to make changes. She showed great respect for my work, and honored me as the author. I found her critiquing ability to be brilliant, comfortable, and respectful. To put it in the simplest, purest way I can, Pauline cares. I highly recommend Pauline’s critiquing services to anyone who wants to present a fully polished work for publication.”

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Bartel Communications Inc.
12½ Division Street
Waterford, NY 12188
Telephone/FAX (518) 237-1353

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